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Links to the comments I made:
Kevin's Blog
Samera's Blog
Sorry for this being a little late. I forgot about it.
After looking at other people's drafts, I found that they generalize their ideas alot in the into. It seems that they focus more on the summary of the stories rather than the idea that they are going to place their essay on. This will help me a lot. So now I know to focus more on the idea that I want to present through the two stories rather than the stories themselves.

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No problem, Reagan. You're doing well with this. I appreciate that you are keeping up with these assignments, even though I'm not doing the best job making it a big part of what we do together. Your comments are insightful and you take the time to respond to what I ask. I enjoy reading your consideration of things. Good work, as usual. Keep it up. Thank you.
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